shea lovekin

it was great

I liked it all in all

I liked it for the most part besides the few grammer and spelling issues. I would advise you to set it aside for a while and then after a while go back and you will see things there you missed before. The main aspect that pulled me in was the actuall picture for it. It was very intriging and I wanted to understand why this child seemed so sad. Thank you for letting me read your peice Shea Lovekin

nice

I liked it, but if I could give you some advise? When you write you should try to use different words that mean the same but describe better. All in all, I liked it, it made me laugh.

amazing

I have to say, it reminded me a lot of my book I just wrote. Everyone is so hung up on forboddin love, but still, LOVED IT!! keep it up. Read mine and I bet you will feel the same

fantastic

You keep up the good work. Everyone has a writter in them, they just need to find it. Good luck and make sure to read my book!!