The Chapter Chapter: Any suggestions for improvement?

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  • Anna Lewis

    Anna Lewis

    Lord of the reads: +5401

    • 22 Oct 01:28

    I think I am nearing the end of this!
    Any suggestions?

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    • Anna Lewis

      Anna

      22 Oct 01:28

      I think I am nearing the end of this!
      Any suggestions?

    • Georgina Lewis

      Georgina

      22 Oct 01:30

      Anna said: I think I am nearing the end of this! Any suggestions?

      Can’t you put in the story about skating on the pond? I thought it was good. And you need to put a capital letter for ‘Lady’ who said about it.
      Check all the authors’ names are OK as well – there was one with a letter missed out I think.

      Otherwise, looks great!

    • Lorna Lewis

      Lorna

      22 Oct 01:31

      Anna said: I think I am nearing the end of this! Any suggestions?

      There appear to be some blank pages – are there supposed to be?

    • Jim Ralley

      Jim

      22 Oct 01:33

      Anna said: I think I am nearing the end of this! Any suggestions?

      The ‘Ormington’, third name of the five min masterpiece needs a capital lette. Page 33: the picture in the background hinders reading slightly. I’d suggest fading the image more or lightening the area where the text is.
      Like the drum poen. Very nice work.

      But yeh, the whole thing looks really good.

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