I think I am nearing the end of this!
Can’t you put in the story about skating on the pond? I thought it was good. And you need to put a capital letter for ‘Lady’ who said about it.
Check all the authors’ names are OK as well – there was one with a letter missed out I think.
Otherwise, looks great!
The ‘Ormington’, third name of the five min masterpiece needs a capital lette. Page 33: the picture in the background hinders reading slightly. I’d suggest fading the image more or lightening the area where the text is.
Like the drum poen. Very nice work.
But yeh, the whole thing looks really good.